Opinions please

I’d like opinions on this hardship letter I received. Not a heart wrenching story but it is short and sweet. I wrote in an earlier post about this couple. They don’t have an apparent hardship - only that they are in over their heads - two mortgages, kids, in-law and expenses. If anything should be added that might strenghten the case, please let me know.

We have suffered a recent hardship and request a Short Sale approval of our home in order to keep from going into foreclosure.

I have been staying home with our 20 month old daughter since birth and also care for my 73 year old mother-in-law while my husband, ??? works and overwhelming amount of overtime in order to cover our minimum household costs. With no immediate relief in site, we are left with submitting our most recent offer of $135,400.00 and request this offer be accepted with Short Sale Approval.

Your consideration for our request for a Short Sale approval would be greatly appreciated.