Need Your Advice on a private lender mailer

General Real Estate Investing
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Thanks everyone

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Is this for lead generation or will this be sent to “warm” prospects?

Overall, I think its good. It is informative and explains a lot to the potential lender.

If this is used for lead generation, though, I would rather it had a much simpler message. Like, “Investing in the Stock Market sucks! Little known but highly profitable local investment pays you a predictable, certain, and secured 10% return! Call XXX-XXXX, leave your mailing address and I’ll rush you my free 8-page report. No salesman will ever call!”